I'd like to write about one thing of the belief in my culture. It's Lemon juice by homemade. It helps people when they are sick especially for fever. For example, when they got a headache, they make Lemon juice to help them to be fine. It actually helps so much. It also helps when people feel like they don't like to eat anything even though they want to eat so they can make Lemon juice to help them to avoid that feeling. my opinion i believe that because I had that feeling which was I wanted to eat but I couldn't so I made Lemon juice and when I drunk it, I felt better.
Hi Zainab
ReplyDeleteUsually I drink orange juice. I think lemon juice is a litter bitter. I have never drunk lemon juice by homemade. Is it a litter bitter or sweet.
Hi Zainab
ReplyDeleteIf you ask me, I think fresh Lemon Juice is a wonderful juice in our life and I like it very much.
Hi ZOZO,
ReplyDeleteI know lemon juice is good for health.
But if you ask me, I don't think I wanna try it because it is not good taste for me.
Hi, Zainab.
ReplyDeleteThis is Ethan.
That's cool. I think the lemon juice is good for our health.But I don't know very much about it for headache. Really?
That's all. Thank you~!
Hi Zozo
ReplyDeleteYou're right. I also drink it when I have a fever, but I also drink sports drink.
Hi,Zozo! I'm Chika!
ReplyDeleteActually,I have never drink it,but really interested it!
If I got a bad feel, I'll try it!
Hi Zainab,
ReplyDeleteI agree with you lemon juice helps people when they are sick,and I think it's popular for us in our cities even with mint.
Rway Alhkeem
Hi Zainab,
ReplyDeleteFreshly squeezed homemade lemonade is one of the best drinks ever! I never thought about it helping with headaches or increasing appetite. That's pretty interesting. When you make it, do you add sugar?
Here are some grammar errors/phrases to look at:
1. Lemon juice by homemade-->homemade lemonade
2. when they got a headache, they make Lemon juice to help them to be fine. (who is "they?") You could say, "When people get a headache, they...."
3. ....eat anything even though.... -->this is a run-on; add a period (.) after anything.
Your grade for this assignment is 4/4.
Thank you for sharing.